Lady @Lady@cat.family

this author just completely punting on the idea of actually coming up with things for link to say and just going “he said some things and they were very effective which shows he knows her super well”

if you're going to mention link walking in on zelda when she is nearly naked, the least you could do is try to sell it

i say this because this is the default mode of interaction for white people, and so the only way to foil it is to target your translation specifically at them

honestly if white people don’t horribly misunderstand your translation and populate it with their own pre·existing beliefs about the world, it probably isn’t very good

@SportsGoblin it's good i should play it more

@SportsGoblin isn't that the boss from THUMPER

i don't care about the new mechanics where are the plot writeups

dating simulator

i think the part of the story which is not a blowjob is a little bit of a slog to get through and not very interesting so like. not exactly a rec regarding the fic as a whole but the author is not terrible at smut

7/10 blowjob!

pros:
- the bit leading up to it has some nice moments
- generally pretty good progression for a first time blowjob fic
- kind of silly and absurd at times in harmless ways

cons:
- the pacing has some starts and stops and the beginning especially doesn't quite land right
- i think it is a bit too committed to exposition at the expense of vibes
- zelda is a little TOO into it lol