Edit: Due to feedback line was changed to:
Tomo raised one finger, drawing a tick in the air. “Air point,” he said.
Dropping the word "air" and using "point" was a possibility, but the comment references a game they play.
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Do you understand the following reference? One beta reader said it was obscure. "air point" as in the quote below.
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“Actually, we’re not bad, fast runners, loud chanters,” I said. That made all my family grin.
Tomo even chalked up another air point for me.
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@NaraMoore i think more than actually comprehending air point my brain just edited the “air” out and then found the resulting sentence perfectly comprehensible so didnt care what the air bit meant
