starting The Nightmare Before Kissmas by Sara Raasch
https://app.thestorygraph.com/books/3e5448c9-562a-4cca-adf0-0ad4ff2ad26d
its rare that a fiction author uses a word I don't know the meaning of or haven't seen before
this author just did
"It curls over my tongue, a diaphanous cloud, and even this subtle there-then-gone sizzle of his taste makes my eyelashes flutter."
"diaphanous"
@packetcat i’ve read smut that i enjoyed, but never in a traditionally published book. i don’t think editors at traditional publishers really know what to do with it, and so they either leave it alone or give bad advice. that, or they are just targeting an audience which is very much Not Me