this profic just pulled the absolutely fucking weirdest lead-in to its spicy bits i'm so confused

i can't even explain it without a lot of words and some heavy content warnings but SUFFICE TO SAY it had the mood set perfectly and then for some reason decided to drag it through the mud and THEN, for SOME REASON, the protagonist is just emotionally IGNORING that which what even was the point then???? you already HAD a perfectly good setup?????

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teach romance authors how to fucking pace a story and establish a mood

TWISTS AND SUSPENSE DO NOT PAIR WELL WITH SEXY SCENES

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