Sorry but if you don't care enough to write a sentence better than that first one, I will not care enough to play your game
"...where in order to survive you must..." is just
Fucking awful writing
Middle school level
You're selling a product here, you have to look your best
If that's your best, I have no reason to believe anything else about the game will be good
"Dark Moon is a survival strategy game wherein players must avoid the Sun's scorching rays and embrace the darkness in order to survive."
Bam. Done.
Actually, you might not need "in order to survive." That's kind of implied in "survival strategy" isn't it
