@witchfynder_finder if somebody was paying me a take‐author’s meagre salary i could probably come up with something
@witchfynder_finder maybe it was intentionally making him look horny to like, emphasize his teenageness and lack of control over his visions but it just felt largely incongruous with the rest of his character to me
@witchfynder_finder “Dune accidentally makes teenage protagonist look horny” is probably my biggest beef with it off the top of my head